
Belvoir Castle, England
From the coliseum
Death at the tip of a sword
Surviving again, thinking of death
What a gift this would be, as
Chains clink between shuffling feet
The end of living; but wrong
Dying a little more, this day
Crowd noise, distant fading
A lost echo drowning, in a sea of lost hope
Descending staircase, spiraling hell
Beneath the castle grounds
Circling on cold damp, desperate stone
Nothing escapes; not light or even life
Darkness, home to a demonic presence
That which has no name
Travels unthwarted in my head
Grabbing thoughts by the nostrils
Pulling hard to hold on
While death permeates the stone walls
Seeping in, like the black plague
On an evening fog within the keep
Door slamming, chattered latch
Throw down, dragged
Caressing the granite floors
With pallid tearing skin
Screams as muffled echoes
Flesh crawling in hideous retreat
Alone, utter darkness speaks aloud
Counting days
Tracks lost in obscure gloom
Name forgotten in the book of memories
Then remembered as “Destitute”.
Yet who speaks to the dungeon walls?
Coaxing their obsidian secrets
From the musty, coated granite
Where does this presence sleep in the darkness?
Lurking in the shadows of moon light
Bringing on a haunting psychosis
Just before a raging dawn.
Sleep on till the morning
Sleep on with your last breath
For tomorrow begins another day
From your retched last home
OSI#120: Oubliette
9 comments:
'For tomorrow, a new life begins'...and for tomorrow, we don't what life may bring...
a very sad tale Rob...and you really made it so poignant!
As always, I envy your poetic skills...:)
I missed last week's Icarus!
that should be "we don't know what life may bring"...pls note the correction, thanks!
Your imagery in this poem was so vivid...loved it!
and that's the essence.. no oubliette can hold a free spirit forever.. NO, NO, NO.. yes, the day will begin a fresh.. well said..
Beautifully dark and atmospheric, but with hope. Excellent.
Imprisonment, freedom, new life. We can transform one into the other. Wow.
Wonderfully well said. Lovely imagery, vibrant with thought.
Excellent tale! Sad, but I love the line "tomorrow begins a new day" I need that right now. Thank you!
This is soooooo descriptive, Rob. I walked every step and felt the pain of every inch of 'dragged' slide with the prisonor.
I was looking for a favorite line or two but the whole last two verses are my faves.
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